Your take on Mary and John is very strong, I like it very much and love how you simply have years in between go by without a mention on what happened to them. Makes it even more powerful. possessive but scared John is so moving 8and yes, after a war experience, it makes sense he needs to be on his own) and determined, self sure Mary is just like the mary I saw in the Pilot, that brief glimpse of her that we got.
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Your take on Mary and John is very strong, I like it very much and love how you simply have years in between go by without a mention on what happened to them. Makes it even more powerful. possessive but scared John is so moving 8and yes, after a war experience, it makes sense he needs to be on his own) and determined, self sure Mary is just like the mary I saw in the Pilot, that brief glimpse of her that we got.
thank you :D