help, please?

Anyone got a few minutes to look over a girl!Sam/Dean 3K fic for me?

I know, I've got at least another 12k words to write on i used to know you so well, but this one wouldn't let me go.

A warning under the ( cut )

I'd like to release this into the wild sometime tonight.

murder now the path called must we

murder now the path called must we
Adult
3000 words
girl!Sam/Dean
warning off page attempted rape of main character and murder of oc
he doesn’t remember anything until he swings open the car door, violence in his belly, stabbing deep
Pre show, very AU. Beta by the lovelytwivamp92, everything is right because of her. Mistakes are all mine.

Title from Sober, Tool

( “I need you to come,” she sobs out the last word, “—home.” )