SPN drabble: caffeine (Sam - 100 words)

[obeetaybee]

Title: caffeine
Rating: G
Spoiler: 2.01
Warnings: none
Word Count: 100





Maybe...

His feet moved below him, the coffee cup hot in his hand.

it’s alright…

Could he trust this? Could he trust the prayer rolling around like a litany in his head?

Maybe...

Everyone survived, miraculously. All three of them were going to walk out of this place.

we won’t fight anymore.

They still had the colt and the bullet. They could still track down the demon.

I don’t know...I don’t know.

The car could be fixed, damn it. They still had Dad’s truck if it couldn’t be.

But maybe, just maybe...

The coffee cup slipped from his hand.

Comments

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

Oh. Wow.

[bluesister.livejournal.com]

The broken structure works so well in what must have been a disjointed moment in Sam's head just then. Very nice.

[the-viper-room.livejournal.com]

Oh... *hugs Sam*

[ongiara.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is so heartbreaking. A small moment of hope, denial, wishing and realization. *sniff*
Lovely job.

[cloex-brosluvr.livejournal.com]

You broke me beautifully.

*loves*

[tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com]

you just know sam's world got a whole lot brighter between dad sending him out for coffee and dean waking up, and then got a hell of a lot dimmer right after, and this mirrors that perfectly, the little bit of hope and the sudden knowledge that no, it's not going to be ok.

[jaydecrow.livejournal.com]

Oh. MY. God.

You quoted one of my favorite Patty Griffin songs.

"Maybe love is waiting at the end of every war..."

I always wished I coudl be the kind of person who could get up int he morning and drink coffee with Mary.

This is just beautiful.