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Got my SPN/SH story back from beta.

Looks like Bevie's got a lot of work to do.

Nah, it's all good. She pointed out a bunch of stuff that was messed up/wrong/OOC etc, that I missed. I was just happy I actually finished a story with a plot and stuff I glossed over all the flaws. That's what a beta is for, right?

I think in my attempt to not make one of the characters a Mary Sue I might have tipped her into the spoiled brat/just plain unpleasant catagory.

So, [livejournal.com profile] undecipherable it may be awhile yet. But trust me, I think when it's done, it'll be worth it.

Anyway.

We all know about [livejournal.com profile] deanwinchester right?

Cause I'm having a really hard time not replying to every entry with "Can I hold you, Dean?" "Can I take all your pain away?"

And the age-old: "Dean? You're so HOT. No, seriously. You ARE. Can I lick you all over?"

Date: 2006-10-02 09:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlmostlikely.livejournal.com
Hey Bev! You know, you're gonna be so much happier w/ your fic once it's posted if you take the time now to get it as polished as possible. I know sometimes the urge to just get something done and out there can be pretty strong, but really, being able to look at something you've created and just KNOW that you've done the absolute best job you possibly can, is far more rewarding in the long run! I have faith in you, honey!

"Dean? You're so HOT. No, seriously. You ARE. Can I lick you all over?"

Please ask Dean if I can lick him, too! *g*

Date: 2006-10-02 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaoticpoetry.livejournal.com
Dean? You're so HOT. No, seriously. You ARE. Can I lick you all over

I totally agree. I think that all the time.

And you're stories are always awesome, so I'm sure its fine.

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